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Thursday, January 22, 2015

My room

Hello, recently at school we spoke about teenage rooms and what parents can do to help their children to decorate their own room.
So today I give you some facts about my own room.

First of all my room is not really spacious, when you come into there is a big black wardrobe at the left side for my clothes and also two big red boxes for magazines and stuff like that. Then at the front there are a window and a door where you can go at the balcony. On the right side there is a mirror and a chair. And the last important thing in my room is my bed it is really big and I love it.

So this is my room, at the end of the text there will be a picture of my room, see you!



2 comments:

  1. mind the following, Kevin: we have recently been talking about / so let me tell you about my room today / then is for TIME not for PLACE ! avoid repetitions, there are other adjectives than BIG, e.g. large, spacious,etc.

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